Crit and HMD

[herofacade]

I've gotten complaints before of Cross's character. I am completely willing to fix things if they don't make sense or if the voice does need to improve. Seriously, this is a character I want to make better but I can't do that if people don't point out what's wrong with him other than saying "he's just bad." I'll make Anon for those who aren't willing to talk face to face, all I ask is for a bit of respect and honesty. We're all just trying to have fun and I want o make it an enjoyable experience for all.